As for the similes: When there is a simile in fiction, if it comes from a character's throughts, I think it works only if it comes across as something the character, as the reader knows him/her at that point, would actually think. Would this guy, on feeling annoyance, actually think, "Why, right now I feel like I do when I'm working on a design and can't get the scale right"?
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As for the similes: When there is a simile in fiction, if it comes from a character's throughts, I think it works only if it comes across as something the character, as the reader knows him/her at that point, would actually think. Would this guy, on feeling annoyance, actually think, "Why, right now I feel like I do when I'm working on a design and can't get the scale right"?