That's great. It does need a bit of a Brit-pick though, what with Aragorn being the epitome of the European hero archetype; "pretty good" would be better as "rather good", "busted" -> "pitted" or "pock-marked", "jerk" -> "twit", and so on. Sorry, I sound terribly picky, don't I? :D
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Date: 2003-10-20 01:35 am (UTC)