As someone who has never read Ibsen, I can say you painted such a clear picture of the characters that I didn't need to have read A Doll's House to have a great sense of who they were and at least some of what had been in their past. You gave good stage directions, too, including the lighting. I'm very impressed - no way could I have written that well in high school.
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Date: 2006-02-26 02:50 am (UTC)